Persuasive writing

19 06 2017

So – you have looked at the two texts –  which one was most persuasive? What was it about the text that made you choose it?

Paignton Zoo 

 

Then can you help me and BBB with a checklist of persuasive features in the comments.

 

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10 responses to “Persuasive writing”

    19 06 2017
      Mr L (10:43:13) :     Reply

    I prefer the Paignton Zoo leaflet.
    It has lots of persuasive features

    Boasting statements: more animals than anyone else in the South West …. with over two thousand creatures

    Rhetorical questions : So, if you are wondering where to go for a family day out

    Lists of attractions : indoor and outdoor play areas, the Jungle Express train, keeper talks…

    Challenge statement : you’d better leave a whole day, you’ll need it!

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    19 06 2017
      20ryan (10:43:45) :     Reply

    Plan your visit is persuasive because it is telling you that you need to come when we open

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    19 06 2017
      20ryan (10:54:16) :     Reply

    Hawk ridge farm park tells you what time it opens and plan your visit does not say what time it opens .

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    19 06 2017
      20ryan (11:25:57) :     Reply

    I thing that plan your visit is better because they have more features.

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    19 06 2017
      20samir (11:26:42) :     Reply

    I prefer Hawk Ridge Farm Park because it tills you time wen it end and wen it starts and it saes it has sow much parking this information for your family.

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    19 06 2017
      20ryan (11:28:12) :     Reply

    I thing that plan your visit is better because they have more features like plan your visit.

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    19 06 2017
      20mysha (11:33:28) :     Reply

    I prefer hawk rige farm park because it tells you when starts and ends and it says world of wonder to make it sound adventures and there is ample parking and its 5 minutes from junction 25 of the meteor way

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    19 06 2017
      20jacob (11:33:34) :     Reply

    I prefure Hawk Ridge Farm Park because mums and dads don’t need to worry where to park. I prefer that park because you can marvel in the bats cave.

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    19 06 2017
      20borys (11:33:38) :     Reply

    I LIke moor the LIon park pikcher I chsd lion park because the where lowds of animals,and it got moor animals an the first leter.

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    19 06 2017
      20nicola (11:33:48) :     Reply

    I Prufure the lion one because it shows a pichere of what you can see there and in the paper it says more exiting things then the other one.

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